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From a lower place


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When I climbed down out of the Real mountains

Into the valley in the shadow of the mountains

There was a raven perched on my shoulder.

Life was hard in the valley

But I soon found out there was an even lower place to go.


2

I lived in a boxcar

Until I got cut up in a fight.

I quit my job in the "Best Damned Gelato"

And followed my favorite anima to Madrid.

But she got tired of us pretty quick

And I drifted, dreamless.


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Now I am old, resting under a mangrove on a beach

Of salt-white sand

Trying to embrace my brother's advice

To never take oneself too seriously.

But it is hard knowing what I know

Harder still seeing what I see.

The large wakes from white boats

Are slapping the beach like spankings.

I think they really believe they are happy.


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There is a lull.


5

I think the sun is rising.


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When all is said and done

(which is never, but humor me)

I will consider myself lucky

If someday someone says

I wish I had known him.


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Gary Lindorff is a poet, writer, blogger and author of five nonfiction books, three collections of poetry, "Children to the Mountain", "The Last recurrent Dream" (Two Plum Press), "Conversations with Poetry (coauthored with Tom Cowan), and (more...)
 

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